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PostSubject: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:55 pm

I WONDER

When days are
Dull and skys
Are grey I sit
At my window
Thinking what would
A storm be
Like would it
Woosh everybody away ?
Would thunder make
The noise clish clash
Clish maybe so?
Would lightning
Make all different shapes
In the sky ?
If I sat at my window
All day I
Wonder if a
Storm would
Come along
Someday .

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PostSubject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:23 pm

I like your use of questions in this poem. Thanks for sharing. Tango x
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PostSubject: I Wonder   Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:31 pm

Hi Hayley,

This is a great little poem!

Charlotte.
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PostSubject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:00 am

This is a nice poem Hayley. I realy enjoyed reading it. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:03 pm


hello hayley,
i liked your poem
very cleverly put together.
do you like to write lots of poetry???
well done
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PostSubject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:48 am

Lovely poem Hayley; I often wonder these things too.. Look forward to reading more from you.
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PostSubject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:48 pm

what a great peom, i like how u took a stormy & gloomy day and went and made it a intresting and fun day. God Bless
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PostSubject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:21 am

this poem is awesome hayley. i love thunder storms. your poem was perfect. i cant wait to read more of your poetry.

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PostSubject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10   Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:22 am

Hayley

Well Done

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