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hayley-mcCormick-08 NEW FRIEND:

Joined : 13 Apr 2008 Posts : 1
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tango JUDGE:

Joined : 06 Apr 2008 Posts : 53
| Subject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10 Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:23 pm | |
| | I like your use of questions in this poem. Thanks for sharing. Tango x |
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Charlotte JUDGE:

Joined : 04 Apr 2008 Posts : 38
| Subject: I Wonder Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:31 pm | |
| Hi Hayley,
This is a great little poem!
Charlotte. |
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suzie ADMINISTRATOR

Joined : 05 Apr 2008 Posts : 106
| Subject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10 Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:00 am | |
| This is a nice poem Hayley. I realy enjoyed reading it. Suzie |
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janx JUDGE:


Joined : 06 Apr 2008 Posts : 88
| Subject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10 Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:03 pm | |
| hello hayley, i liked your poem very cleverly put together. do you like to write lots of poetry??? well done janx  |
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annamoy JUDGE:

Joined : 10 Apr 2008 Posts : 102
| Subject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10 Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:48 am | |
| | Lovely poem Hayley; I often wonder these things too.. Look forward to reading more from you. |
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christian NEW FRIEND.


Joined : 06 Apr 2008 Posts : 24
| Subject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10 Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:48 pm | |
| what a great peom, i like how u took a stormy & gloomy day and went and made it a intresting and fun day. God Bless _________________ 10 Years FUZZY |
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kimi ADMINISTRATOR


Joined : 07 Apr 2008 Posts : 71
| Subject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10 Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:21 am | |
| this poem is awesome hayley. i love thunder storms. your poem was perfect. i cant wait to read more of your poetry. kimi |
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Maggie FOUNDER:


Joined : 01 Apr 2008 Posts : 296
| Subject: Re: I Wonder name Hayley age 10 Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:22 am | |
| Hayley
Well Done
Maggie |
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