emily NEW FRIEND:


Age : 10 Joined : 19 Apr 2008 Posts : 6
| Subject: My friend trikey emily aged 9 Sat Apr 19, 2008 7:20 pm | |
|  MY FRIEND TRIKEY Trikey is special Trikey is sweet she eats ginger nuts with great speed she lets me ride her every week she makes me feel safe even at speed so thank you trikey for caring as to wether i stay on or fly through the air By Emily 9 years |
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Maggie FOUNDER:


Joined : 01 Apr 2008 Posts : 296
| Subject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9 Sat Apr 19, 2008 10:51 pm | |
| Hi Emily
It sounds like trikey is a horse. You seem to trust him/her very much.
A really nice poem and again well presented.
Thank you for your entry into the competition and good luck.
Thank you Maggie |
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suzie ADMINISTRATOR

Joined : 05 Apr 2008 Posts : 106
| Subject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9 Sun Apr 20, 2008 7:35 am | |
| A nice well written poem Emily I enjoyed reading it. Suzie |
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Charlotte JUDGE:

Joined : 04 Apr 2008 Posts : 38
| Subject: My friend trikey Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:06 am | |
| Hi Emily,
That's a lovely poem for Trikey, I'll have to read it to her!
Can't wait to read some more,
Charlotte. |
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kimi ADMINISTRATOR


Joined : 07 Apr 2008 Posts : 71
| Subject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9 Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:24 am | |
| this was alot of fun to read. it made me laugh when i got to the end, whether you fell off or not. i loved your poem. kimi |
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annamoy JUDGE:

Joined : 10 Apr 2008 Posts : 102
| Subject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9 Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:09 pm | |
| Great poem emily and I hope you stay on Trikey! Ann |
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Maggie FOUNDER:


Joined : 01 Apr 2008 Posts : 296
| Subject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9 Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:22 am | |
| EMILY
Well Done
Maggie |
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