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My friend trikey emily aged 9

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PostSubject: My friend trikey emily aged 9   Sat Apr 19, 2008 7:20 pm

MY FRIEND TRIKEY

Trikey is special
Trikey is sweet
she eats ginger nuts
with great speed
she lets me ride her every week
she makes me feel safe
even at speed
so thank you trikey for caring
as to wether i stay on or fly through the air

By Emily 9 years
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PostSubject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9   Sat Apr 19, 2008 10:51 pm

Hi Emily

It sounds like trikey is a horse. You seem to trust him/her very much.

A really nice poem and again well presented.

Thank you for your entry into the competition and good luck.

Thank you Maggie
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PostSubject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9   Sun Apr 20, 2008 7:35 am

A nice well written poem Emily I enjoyed reading it. Very Happy
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PostSubject: My friend trikey   Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:06 am

Hi Emily,

That's a lovely poem for Trikey, I'll have to read it to her!

Can't wait to read some more,

Charlotte.
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PostSubject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9   Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:24 am

:Rofl :Rofl :Rofl this was alot of fun to read. it made me laugh when i got to the end, whether you fell off or not. i loved your poem.

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PostSubject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9   Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:09 pm

Great poem emily and I hope you stay on Trikey!

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PostSubject: Re: My friend trikey emily aged 9   Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:22 am

EMILY

Well Done

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