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chelsea
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Joined : 06 Apr 2008
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|  Subject: Spring has sprung! chelsea  Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:32 pm | |
|  SPRING HAS SPRUNG!
Spring has sprung up like a bouncy balloon,Everythings bursting with life.The land has been painted with bright shiny colours,The world is alive once again.Flowers have unfolded,The bumble bees are back.The bunny rabbits hop about,Along the grassy track.Spring has sprung up like a trickling stream,Everythings bursting with life.The grass has been sprinkled with tiny blue dewdrops,Spring has sprung up once again!chelsea
Age 11 years
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janx
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Joined : 06 Apr 2008
Posts : 88
| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:56 pm | |
| hello chelsea,
i liked your poem about spring.
i found it interesting and very colourful.
i liked, "spring has sprung like a bouncy balloon"
very good.
i am looking foward to reading some more from you/
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chelsea
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Joined : 06 Apr 2008
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| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:28 pm | |
| to janx
Thank you for reading my poems and reviews. I am glad that you liked them. I will write some more soon and i hope you will enjoy those as well!
thank you
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suzie
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Joined : 05 Apr 2008
Posts : 106
| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Sun Apr 06, 2008 6:41 pm | |
| A lovely spring poem. Good luck in the competition.
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Maggie
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Joined : 01 Apr 2008
Posts : 296
| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:25 pm | |
| Hi Chelsea
Welcome to the forum.
A nicely written and refreshing spring poem.
Good luck in the competition.
Maggie |
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kimi
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Joined : 07 Apr 2008
Posts : 71
| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Mon Apr 07, 2008 5:09 am | |
| Chelsea
i love your poem, i really like how spring sprung like a trickling spring. you are an awesome writer. i hope you keep writing. i cant wait to read more of your poems.
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christian
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Joined : 06 Apr 2008
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| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:44 am | |
| that is a great peom, it realy does express some of the real details about spring keep writing cause your doing a great job God Bless
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annamoy
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Joined : 10 Apr 2008
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| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:50 pm | |
| | Lovely poem Chelsea; I can feel all the freshness of Spring in your words. |
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Charlotte
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Joined : 04 Apr 2008
Posts : 38
| | Subject: Spring has sprung Thu Apr 24, 2008 3:39 pm | |
| Hi Chelsea,
I love this poem!
Great stuff
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Maggie
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| | Subject: Re: Spring has sprung! chelsea Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:24 am | |
|  Chelsea
Well deserved winning poem
Thank you for your entry.
Maggie |
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