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PostSubject: The Man by Christian   Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:09 am
The Man

Who is the man who walks down the street
With scars upon his hands and feet
He does not fear any gangs or bands
Yet He is the ruler of all the lands

He wears a crown of all gold
And in His hands the world He holds
He leads us thru the chilly mist
And protects us thru the dark abyss

Lord Christ our Savior

Written by Christian Rodriguez
Age 10
4-6-08

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PostSubject: Re: The Man by Christian   Mon Apr 07, 2008 5:13 am
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i love this poem, i can tell its written from your heart. keep writing, i cant wait to read more of your poems. awesome job :dance

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PostSubject: Re: The Man by Christian   Mon Apr 07, 2008 6:59 am
A lovely poem Christian. I look forward to reading some more.
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PostSubject: Re: The Man by Christian   Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:08 pm
Hi Christian

Thank you for submitting a beautiful and meaningful poem.

Well written for a ten year old.

Good luck in the competition.

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PostSubject: The man   Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:48 pm
Hi Christian,

I liked your poem, it is very well written for a child of your age.

Keep writing!

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PostSubject: Your poem   Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:57 pm
Good stuff! Keep it up.
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PostSubject: Re: The Man by Christian   Wed Apr 09, 2008 3:37 pm
hello christian
very well worded.
what a nice verse.
well done
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PostSubject: Re: The Man by Christian   Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:46 am
thank u for all those coments, those really mean alot.
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PostSubject: Re: The Man by Christian   Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:23 am
Christian

Well done.

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